I agree.
The sound effects do seem to clash with the music during the begginning segment, You should Probably Cut the first silent part of your song off, I like the progression of the instruments, The slow and sure movement from the strings to the beat, and then the sound fx slow down adn it becomes a much better overall piece. I like it, I just don't care for the beggining as much, and You should definately chop your first two seconds of silence to make for that little extra into a good track.
8/10/4/5